Rikchik Songs (4 of 7)

[cnoocy]

This should be quite doable. I've made some less Rikchik-M style choices to try to hold on to some of the original word order.

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Re: Okay, seriously

[cnoocy]

Gather is an idea, really indicating conjunction more than anything. And you've missed one pronomial (which would still be dangling in the entire translated text.)
Should dangling pronomials be marked in the parsed form somehow?