He/she/it artfully says words (poetry? singing?). Then those words change into gathering emotions before everything, inside a big, still, lonely shield. Then the sun sets."
Let me know if you think I have my pseudo-prepositions backwards.
Aha! Missed the dangling pronomial. It's "Now I can see _that_ friend."
So: "Now I can see that friend.
He/she/it artfully says words (poetry? singing?). Then those words change into gathering emotions after everything, inside a big, still, lonely shield. Then the sun rises."
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Translation attempt.
Date: 2004-05-12 06:35 am (UTC)He/she/it artfully says words (poetry? singing?).
Then those words change into gathering emotions before everything, inside a big, still, lonely shield. Then the sun sets."
Let me know if you think I have my pseudo-prepositions backwards.
Re: Translation attempt.
Date: 2004-05-12 06:40 am (UTC)Re: Translation attempt.
Date: 2004-05-12 07:09 am (UTC)So:
"Now I can see that friend.
He/she/it artfully says words (poetry? singing?).
Then those words change into gathering emotions after everything, inside a big, still, lonely shield. Then the sun rises."