Aha! Missed the dangling pronomial. It's "Now I can see _that_ friend."
So: "Now I can see that friend.
He/she/it artfully says words (poetry? singing?). Then those words change into gathering emotions after everything, inside a big, still, lonely shield. Then the sun rises."
Re: Translation attempt.
Date: 2004-05-12 07:09 am (UTC)So:
"Now I can see that friend.
He/she/it artfully says words (poetry? singing?).
Then those words change into gathering emotions after everything, inside a big, still, lonely shield. Then the sun rises."