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[cnoocy]

This is the entry for answers to the Rikchik song lyrics post.

Comments

Re: Some translations

[cnoocy]

#1: You're missing a word in the repeated section.
#3: Check your relation for Two and God and your aspect for Tentacle. Also look for pronomials and possible idioms.

Re: Some translations

[rikchik.livejournal.com]

#1: No I'm not. I've got that "Not" at the beginning.

aspects/relations/pronomials corrected.

[rikchik.livejournal.com]

#3: A span of time and that god which flowers an animate repulsion-tentacle towards peace, those two things move surrounded by a sky that is 2-ed.

Re: aspects/relations/pronomials corrected.

[cnoocy]

That should be sufficient to get it. The song is well-known, but this is from a less-well-known verse of it.